CK Lynn

Nanoedmo is new this year. National Novel Editing Month is meant for you to revise those words written in November, but you can work on any piece, as long as ...

I really liked this poem. It was powerful, and not in a sob-story moral type way. Great job.

I like your revised version much better than the first one, however more imagery would make this better as well as some stronger language.

I liked it, but it was awkward at times and you didn't pause at important moments.

I really thought this was good song. THe title gave me a much different empression of what it was, though. In the third line of the third verse, do you ...

Liked it... the ryhme takes away the seriousness, though.

What was it like when you could fly? What was it like when you were a little kid and could lose your self in a world of powers? What if ...

I really liked the subject of this poem, it was quite different. The way you worded it, not quite lyrical, not quite short-sounding, really coplemented it. Good job!

I really liked it. The third verse I thought was perhaps your weakest. Maybe you should revise the last line of that part.

Okay, I'm having trouble with my computer, so I can't put an attachment on these for some reason, so this will have to count as a full critique. I liked ...

Interesting. I liked it, though I would advise to make it a smidgin longer, I didn't feel as if it had an end.

I liked it, it was quite different and didn't come right out and say "I am a cat" in the first line. There was one problem, and that was the ...

Oh, I do know how to save it to make it compatible with older versions of word, which I think makes it save in .doc. When you go to the ...

Yeah, I tried to save it, but it glitched word or something and I got one of those "this program is not responding" messages. I am using Vista, anmd it ...

Okay, I've been trying to critique this one story, but every time I go to put an attachment on my reply, it doesnt work. Here's what I'm doing, tell me ...